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every day,
i wake up,
look around,
and see your face.

even when
we are apart,
i see your face
before me,

a ghostly
vision of
your perfection,
i long for reality.

when we are not near,
i think of you all through the day,
i miss the things you do
and the sweet things you say.

but in my mind i remember
the truth behind it all
that memory is poor substitute
for the true, wonderful you.

we may not be apart for long,
but moments feel like eternity,
the days pass by so slowly
in spite of my desire to see you.

a love as strong as this
is a blessing in this world,
the greatest gift you gave to me,
by allowing me your company.

as we commit to our future,
a life shared together,
remember that i love you
now and for forever...
dedicated to Lorraine,

forever and always...
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blcktangledheart Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2006
Very nice. Good flow and rythym and very good imagery.
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Arcirithion Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2006   Writer
thankyou :)
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DarkHalo101 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2005
that's it i'm moving to europe!!:heart::hug::glomp:
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:iconarcirithion:
Arcirithion Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2005   Writer
hehe :D good, europe is way the coolest place... :hug:
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metal-face Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2005
and all of a sudden all the anger i built up inside me
for you
cause you want to re-upload your work
has vanished


please say that this in a catogary of its own? :fingerscrossed:
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:iconarcirithion:
Arcirithion Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2005   Writer
thankyou, i am relieved
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metal-face Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2005
:thanks: no thank you!
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Arcirithion Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2005   Writer
um, ok, all i did was agree not to repreview everything
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metal-face Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2005
i was talking about the poem jackass =p

its so beautiful!
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Arcirithion Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2005   Writer
hehe, yeah, lorraine said that too, im pleased with it
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